Sos прочитай рассказ мэг и поставь если верно,а если нет то минус. там могут быть ожибки,носмысл ясен. my name is mag.my favourite season is autmn.it is a very beautiful time of the year. the trees are brown,yelow and red when it is warm and sanny,my parents,my brothers ad i can have a picnic in thr park.we like to ride a bike or a scooter on a warm autumn day.sometimes we fly a kite or play hide-and-seek in autumn school stars and i can see my school friends again .when i am on holidays i don't see them.i miss my scoolfriends a lot. i think autumn is a wonderful season
только ошибки в словах threes, sunny, yellow.
ну а в принципе всё правильно