То, что выделено жирным - убрать. То, что жирным и курсивом - вставить ))) Плохо, что тут зачёркивания нет, было бы понятней. Dear Sir/Madam, I am interested in becoming a volunteer in (я бы написала of и поставила артикль the) Education International and I would be grateful if you could give me (используй supply вместо give me - звучит лучше) some (не нужно здесь some) further information on the following. First of all, I would appreciate it if you could tell me in any what particular place locality I will be working in. Could you also let me know young people of what age you are looking for. what age you look for young people? I would also like to know what subjects need to be taught. Furthermore, I am interested would like to clarify what is included in into free accommodation. Finally, could you tell me how much will I earn? I will learn. Thank you in advance for your assistance. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am interested in becoming a volunteer in (я бы написала of и поставила артикль the) Education International and I would be grateful if you could give me (используй supply вместо give me - звучит лучше) some (не нужно здесь some) further information on the following.
First of all, I would appreciate it if you could tell me in any what particular place locality I will be working in. Could you also let me know young people of what age you are looking for. what age you look for young people? I would also like to know what subjects need to be taught. Furthermore, I am interested would like to clarify what is included in into free accommodation. Finally, could you tell me how much will I earn? I will learn.
Thank you in advance for your assistance. I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
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