Put the verbs in the story in past simple or past continuous.
jess (lie) on the beach when she (hear) someone calling for help. she (run) to the sea and (see) a small girl underwater just two meters from the shore. she (drown) when jess (take) her out of water and (bring) her to her parents. they (have) a picnic near the car and (know/ not) the girl wasn’t there. jess (tell) them to be more attentive to their children.
Jess was lying on the beach when she heard someone calling for help. She run to the sea and saw a small girl underwater just two meters from the shore. She was drowning when Jess took her out of water and brought her to her parents. They had a picnic near the car and didn't know the girl wasn't there. Jess told them to be more attentive to their children.