Есть минус, много точек. Нужно ярче описать, убрать лишние знаки препинания.
Вот пример: Today i am going to tell you about mu bedroom, i like it very much, it's cool! There's a lot of furniture, for example:TV, big bed, sofa, a big bed. The walls are coloured with bright colors, yellow and white.
Грамматически всё правильно.
Объяснение:
Есть минус, много точек. Нужно ярче описать, убрать лишние знаки препинания.
Вот пример: Today i am going to tell you about mu bedroom, i like it very much, it's cool! There's a lot of furniture, for example:TV, big bed, sofa, a big bed. The walls are coloured with bright colors, yellow and white.
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