проверить текст на наличие ошибок. и некоторые слова, которые не подходят или не похожи на начальный уровень заменить на более простые и примитивные. this summer i went to lake balkhash. weather was very hot and solar. water was warm. i went with the friends. we bathed and played beach volleyball. fried meat in the evening and ate a water-melon. we were there three days. but for the third day weather strongly deteriorated. there was a cold wind and the rain dripped. to bathe it was cold and we walked on the coast. at night in the lake the moon was reflected. it was very beautiful.