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school is a place where we get basic knowledge.
i'm in 7th grade
i go there on foot.
my school is a large three-story building that has everything
lessons start at 9am.
in my class 16 people
i have many good friends at school. we study and play together.
at school, we study many different subjects: history, geography, physics, biology, mathematics, russian and literature. we also study foreign languages: english and german.
our cool teacher is very kind and fair. she loves us.
the school has its own dining room where we can have lunch.
our class participates in extracurricular activities,
our class also loves sports.
our teachers are good and patient.
i love to go to school.

Я учусь в седьмом классе в школе с математическим уклоном. Мне нравиться учиться. Мои любимые предметы – информатика, математика и литература. Я люблю читать книги. Еще я очень люблю рисовать, поэтому занимаюсь в художественной школе. Я очень веселая и общительная. У меня много друзей. Самую лучшую подругу зовут Света. 
 I’m in the seventh grade at mathematical school. I like to study. My favourite subjects are computer sciences, mathematics and literature. I’m fond of reading books. Also I like drawing that’s why I go to art school. I’m very cheerful and sociable person. I have many friends. My best friend’s name is Sveta.

Shopping and entertainment center "the Island" - the largest shopping area in the region, lies to the West of the city, in the former house-building plant, in a ten-minute transport accessibility from the Central part of the city. Designed for residents of the Western area of the city, where about two hundred thousand people. The largest tenants include the electronics hypermarket Eldorado, supermarket "Food," furniture supermarket "Mebelgrad", a children's supermarket "Bublgum", cinema "cinema World", entertainment center "Asteroid", a supermarket of household goods "Yuterra." In addition, there is a pharmacy, dry cleaner, photography Studio, dentist's office, beauty salon, Bank, medical office, ATM.