Можно пересказ данного текста? 55 on april 23, 1564, a son, william, was born to john and mary shakespeare in stratford-upon-avon. his mother was the daughter of a farmer. his father was a glove-maker. william went to a grammar school in stratford and had quite a good education . there he learned to love reading. while still a teenager, william married anne hathaway, a farmer’s daughter some years older than himself. we don’t know how he earned his living during these early years, perhaps he helped his father in the family business. during these years his three children were born: susanna, the eldest, then twins-a son, hamlet and another girl, judith. in 1587 shakespeare went to work in london, leaving anna and the children at home. we don’t know exactly why he did it. some people say that the reason was his love of poetry and theatre . but there is another story which says that he had to run away from law because he killed some deer belonging to a rich man. in london shakespeare began to act and to write plays and soon became an important member of a well-known acting company. most of his plays were performed in the new globe theatre built on the bank of the river thames. in 1613 he stopped writing and went to live in stratford where he died in 1616. four hundred years later, his plays are still acted-not only in england but all around the world.
граммотнее будет - in MY life
presentation to this the day (to this я бы убрала)
I pressed the save button, but, suddenly, my computer stopped working( можно переделать с использованием времени, которое тут у тебя ни разу не встречалось, но это так, как вариант. у тебя тоже граммотно. - Suddenly, my computer stopped working when I was pressing the save button)
on the next day ( оn лишнее)
с временами у тебя всё в порядке, не наговаривай))) а вот предлоги не очень любишь.
У тебя с временами нормально. У тебя тут почти ошибок нет.