Model analysis Read the model essay. Which paragraph contains:
1 writer's first viewpoint with examples/reasons/results
2 |introduction with the writer's opinion
3 writer's second viewpoint with examples/reasons/results
4 writer's closing remarks with a restatement of his/her opinion 5opposing viewpoint with examples/reasons/results
Writing An opinion essay .
The number of mothers who work full time is increasing every year. Some people think that women should stay at home with their children, but I strongly feel that being a working mother is beneficial. D To begin with. going to work means that mothers can provide more income for the family. For example, they can buy better food and clothing for their children. As a result, they can ensure the children have what they need. Secondly working mothers are excellent role models for children. For instance, they demonstrate how to take care of children, the house and pursue a career. This sets a good example of how a modern person makes their own choices about their life. DOn the other hand, workifng long hours means that mothers spend a lot of time away from home Therefore, they may miss out on quality time with their children. >in conclusion. I believe that although it may be difficult to be a working mother, there are ways to balance work and family. Working mothers can help their family financialy and become great role models for their children while getting reaignition for their work.
2. Take a shower
3. Have a breakfast
4. Brush your teeth
5. Watch TV
6. Listen to music
7. Do your homework
8. Go to bed
I can get up at my bedroom
I can have a breakfast in a kitchen
I can brush my teeth at the bathroom
2. Architect designs houses and offices
3. Waiter brings food and drinks to people in restaurant
4. Musician plays a musical instruments
5. Student studies at university
6.Fashion designer makes a beautiful clothes
7. Electrician repairs electrical machines
8. Secretary type letters and answers the phone
1 If I live to be seventy, I will probably have a lot of grandchildren. (First Conditional, we talk about things which are possible in the future)
2 If I lived to be 170, I would probably have bionic limbs. (it's the Second Conditional, we talk about things in the future that are probably not going to be true)
3 If I go out tonight, I'll come home late. (First Conditional, possibility in the future)
4 If I went out every night, I wouldn't get enough sleep. (Second Conditional)
5 If it was/were sunny at the moment, we would go out. (but it's raining now => Second Conditional)
6 If it had been sunny yesterday, we would have played in the park. (but it was cold and rainy, so we stayed at home - it's the Third Conditional, an unreal past condition)
7 If I forget my mum's next birthday, I won't forget myself. (a possible condition in the future, First Conditional)
8 If I had forgotten my mum's last birthday, she would have felt hurt, I think. (the Third Conditional, an unreal past condition)